This is where I began to move the end clips and integrate them into the story at the beginning with the girl getting in the bath. I received this feedback from people in my class who are in my target audience age group. They thought that it didn't make sense to have a story and then other dead women and events at the end. They didn't fit and on looking back, I agreed. So, I started to put these clips within the story, making some of them flicker and doubling some of them up by copy and pasting them next to each other, changing the length of at least one of them so that they didn't look like the same clip. I would do this by cropping one down to a certain time and then on the second clip that was the same as the original, cropping that from the point at which I cropped the other to. Therefore, they wernt just copied clips but just one continuous clip that was being interrupted by the protagonist doing ordinary things.