Penultimate Version of The Misogynist

Here is a version in which I had very nearly finished.



I showed this version to a few people of different ages, from my age to middle-aged, and asked their advice. Here are some of the comments I received:
'The music doesn't lurch in the right place when the tap comes on, it's just a little out.'
'The flickering suffocation clip when the candle is being lit is way too quick to see.'
'The gasp at the end jumps back to the same beginning of it twice. Only one gasp is needed.'
'The music at the end is a little to fast for titles and an over voice.'

So I set about changing these faults. Before the comments, I had already got rid of a bit of unneeded audio on the shot which is looking at the laptop on a close up shot. I also took out background noise in the shot where she walks from the room in the background with the laptop in the foreground.

I then copied the music, shortened it and put it over the same part on the original music bar which is visible in iMovie. I then shifted it along a note or two to make it replicate the sound and sound more dramatic. It enhanced the feeling of panic. I fiddled with the volume clip levels in the music clip to make parts louder and some parts quieter so that parts in the film in terms of visual clips standing out more and not being distracted by the music. I also quietened it at the point where there is an over-voice to make it clearer and more hearable. I cut the end out of the music and took a part from the middle of the music which I copied and put it at the end to calm the feeling of the trailer down yet make it more dramatic and cliffhangery. I took out one of the clips where she is gasping to make there only be one where she inhales and I lengthened the suffocation clip so that it was more visible.